the author was trying to hard to make things sound good and to cuss alot and honestly it sounds like a worse version of a book i tried to write when i was younger and thought swearing was the coolest thing in the world. wattpad is the central for horny teenagers with terrible writing, and yeaaa, this is worse. ❥ the writing was worse than a lot of things i’ve read on wattpad. Things i didn’t like about Den of Vipers: hang in there, because it’s going to be a long one. since i probably can’t write an organized review, maybe i’ll just make a list. i don’t even know where to start, there are so many things wrong with this book. This book is literally wattpad on steroids® If you’ve spent literally anytime on wattpad, you’d have seen this before. She realises that they’re her ‘home’ yada yada. I don’t have it in me to diss him because he’s too 🌸🌙💞🥺Īnyways the five live together yada yada. The man obsessed with bets and runs all the casinos in town but is low key a sweet heart.

The raging psychopath that literally sets people on fire for fun. The brooding ‘enforcer’ with anger issues who spends his nights fighting to get his anger out. The cold, leader who must always put a mask on to protect his brothers and always wears a damn suit. Girl gets sold to big bad mafia group called the vipers (really, were all other names taken that you decided 'vipers' was a cool name?)ġ. When I heard this book was a reverse harem I thought ‘oh like OHSHC?’Īnd before you ask. 600 pages and I still can’t find the plot.

Den of vipers ka knight